Showing posts with label Science Fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Science Fiction. Show all posts

Sunday, December 31, 2023

Read for Fun - Sword Art Online - Alicization Uniting" Volume 14

 This is the conclusion of the "Human Half" of the Alicization storyline. It is basically a sequence of battles on the top floor of Central Cathedral. In that sense, it is kind of like how the Final Boss of a RPG video game has multiple forms and/or stages. Fitting, isn't it? (Even though Underworld is not at all a game. This isn't Aincrad.)

Our heroes face off against Integrity Knight Synthesis 32, Prime Senator Chudelkin, Administrator's secret weapon and then finally, Administrator herself. The pacing is good. This plot structure doesn't feel like a boss slog, like in the above analogy. Each fight has its meaning for the characters and a purpose in the narrative. Reading about them is a different experience than watching the anime. 

The reader can feel Euego's guilt more deeply here, and Kirito's emotional state comes across more clearly as well. Here, in the source material, he is more like a normal boy who doesn't believe himself to be an epic hero. 

We also get a better sense for Quinella/Administrator. While she is translated well enough to animation, we don't get a sense for quite how uncanny/eldritch the author envisioned her to be. By the time Kirito meets her, she is this not-quite-human THING that is both terrifying and awe-inspiring. Even after she loses both arms, her hair is melted, and her face is cracked, her sheer presence radiates "unfathomable beauty" to him. 

Cardinal's fate is still stupid. When I saw it happen in the anime, I hoped that it had suffered adapation compression, and that the source material would have a better explanation. No, that is unfortunately not the case. It is basically the same here. It makes sense. Don't get me wrong. I can understand why Cardinal makes that choice, in that situation, but it is a stupid choice. 

On the other hand, I like the transition to the trouble outside Underworld better. I feel like the anime provided more information earlier to provide more context, and perhaps be less confusing, but that harms the narrative shift. In this volume, one can better sympathize with Kirito's W.t.F. reaction to hearing gunshots after previously going through the grueling boss fight and the calm that came after. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "Sword Art Online - Alicization Uniting" Volume 14 a B+


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Brian Wilkerson is an independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor's degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Saturday, May 27, 2023

ARIA the Masterpiece volume 2 (read for fun)

Return to Aqua for the winter. 

Here we have more slice-of-life tales of Akari the Undine in the city of Neo-Venezia. The story arch here is her first Autumn and Winter in her new home. There's a lot of world-building involved.

First, there's the contrast between Aqua and Manhome. This started in the first volume, with how much more rustic Aqua is than Manhome. Volume 2 builds on that. It sounds like Earth has become more like a single sprawling city with few if any natural areas. This would explain why Neo-Venice has so many tourists. In fact, natural areas from Manhome have been recreated on Aqua. There's an island nearby Neo-Venezia that is a Japanese forest temple. Supposedly, kitsune weddings take place there. 

Second, there's holidays like Vogare Longa (alternatively "Vogalonga"), a gondola race that marks the change of seasons. It's a very big deal. It's also a real thing. The real-life Venice does this every year.  Akari also celebrates New Years Eve with her new friends and reflects on how much has happened in her life over the past year. 

Third, there is a nice mixture of grand and mundane. For the grand scale sci-fi flavor stuff, there's a chapter about Aqua's Gnomes. These are the professionals who maintain Aqua's artificial gravity. They live underground similar to how Akatsuki the salamander lives on a floating island. Then there's some more mundane and small-scale stuff, like gondola cleaning. 

Fourth, the art is beautiful. From the forest temple, to the Bridge of Sighs in Neo-Venice, to the underground city of the Gnomes, it is all beautiful.  This pairs well with the peaceful stories. Really relaxing reading. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "ARIA the Masterpiece volume 2" an A+

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Brian Wilkerson is an independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor's degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.


Monday, March 27, 2023

She Professed Herself Pupil of the Wiseman - Volume 1 (read for fun)

I picked this book up after watching the first season of the anime. It has an intriguing title. I was expecting a story about a girl attempting to follow in her mentor's footsteps. Haha, no. That turns out to be a cover story. She is the "wiseman", herself. 

Sakamori Kagami is "Danblf" in the MMORPG "Ark Earth Online", a classic aged wizard with the associated wrinkles and long white beard. On a lark, he decides to alter Danblf's appearance to a classic magical girl instead, small and delicate, and with long silver hair. At that very moment, after he finishes the alterations but before he can click "cancel", a supernatural occurrence materializes the game into full reality.  Now Kagami is no longer "Danblf" but "Mira", who is Danblf's pupil. Saying anything else is too much trouble, both for Mira and the suddenly real kingdom she wants to protect. 

In other words, this is an Isekai, but so far few of the usual cliches have shown up. This book is much more interested in world-building than harem antics or power-fantasies. 

Much of this book is concerned with world building. In fact, this book does what few others do and gives details about the world that Kagami left when he became Mira in the world of Ark Earth Online. It was a world with fully realized virtual reality. It was used as much for business applications as entertainment; office space no longer existed in physical reality because the same effect could be achieved virtually (think COVID-19 Pandemic web conferences but without any of the downsides). Then, the author uses that to contrast with the pros and cons of the magical medieval-Europe analog of the game-turned-reality.

We see the history of this game world, the events and conflicts that shaped its kingdoms. We see player politics both before and after the supernatural event. We see the development of both mechanical engineering and the magical arts. We see management of dungeons for public safety. We see how Early Game Hell has stifled the development of summoners now that summoning must be learned in real life. Even the climatic battle is less of a "oh no! How will our hero ever survive?!" suspenseful confrontation and is more of a "I wonder what would happen if I did this" experimentation and examination of the new world's rules. 

And yes, the reason that "Danblf" must go by "Mira" has a detailed discussion behind it, and it is very fun. 

Also, yes, the author does get a lot of mileage out of Kagami adjusting to life as a girl. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "She Professed Herself Pupil of the Wiseman - Volume 1" an A+


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Brian Wilkerson is an independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor's degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Sunday, October 23, 2022

The Appeal of an Overpowered Protagonist - Part 3: What is Gained

Last time, I discussed the potential of an overpowered hero in a Shōnen fighting show. The example I used to illustrate this potential was One Punch Man.  Yes, even in such a show where the main action is superheroes fighting monsters, there can still be meaningful conflict and excitement when the protagonist is physically invincible and can defeat any opponent in just one punch. 

Even now, I can hear objections. Saitama is apathetic. He doesn't desire anything other than a worthy opponent. "No Game No Life" doesn't count either, because the gamer siblings are motivated (at least in part) by having fun with games and seeking a rematch with the One True God, Tet. The actual troubles of the world of Dishboard don't bother them (at least not as much as other characters, such as Stephanie).  What if an author wants to write a story about a protagonist who has goals? Surely the protagonist can't be overpowered then, right?

Nope, I have two examples for that situation. Now that I think about it, I actually have three or four. I'll stick with one for now.  It is "The Irregular at Magic High School", and features Tatsuya Shiba.

Tatsuya Shiba lives a world of modern magic, that is, where magic has been codified into something scientific (which is different from Ancient Magic, but that is neither here nor there). Those that study magic professionally are known as Magical Technicians, or simply "Magicians". Tatsuya Shiba is among the most powerful of these magicians. I'm not sure of the exact rankings, but I think that he and his sister, Miyuki, rank in the top five for the entire world. And he is still in high school. 

Now, I know what you're thinking. Isn't Tatsuya a Course Two Student, someone who is considered less capable than other students? Doesn't the story make a big deal about this? Regardless of how he fares in combat, doesn't this mean the story is treating him like an underdog? 

Yes, that is part of what makes Tatsuya work as a protagonist despite being overpowered. What Tatsuya seeks to achieve is not something that can be accomplished through combat. He wants to ensure Miyuki is happy and he wants the world at large to recognize magicians as more than wet-ware weapons. Though he can vaporize people from a distance without effort or restriction (than I know of, at least), that isn't going to accomplish his goals no matter times he does it. Though he has poor relations with his family, fighting them in open combat isn't going to gain him anything. 

(Disclaimer: I'm over-simplifying this for the sake of brevity. Tatsuya's mental state and his family situation are a lot more complicated than I'm making them sound here, and he definitely isn't gung-ho about these goals, or really any goals, at the start of the series. But he is ALWAYS presented as a magic technology geek). 

That is the kind of world that Tatsuya lives in and that is the kind of world that the author wants to write about. Tatsuya can be overpowered because it serves the actual interest of the author. 

From what I've read, the author of "The Irregular at Magic High School" is not interested in writing combat scenes, but in dialogues and intrigue. From what I've seen personally, the author is also interested in a hard magic system and in world building. There is a lot more space devoted to the magic system's theory,  the school set-up, and the general magician society, than to combat or displays of magical power. There is a section about public transportation that has nothing to do with the first book's plot. Yes, really. I found it interesting. 

The first arc, the one that focuses most heavily on the "Course Two Student" idea, is supposed to be an allegorical critique of a certain school systems, which prioritize certain strengths in students while ignoring others, and the stigma this places on those students. Tatsuya and Miyuki Shiba serve the purpose of illustrating this distinction between Course One and Course Two. 

Tatsuya is a Course Two Student, yet he excels in many areas, which enables him to outshine students who are theoretically superior to him by supposedly objective measures. Miyuki is a Course One Student, and she is indeed a talented individual, but she constantly seeks to promote her older brother, because she knows that his strengths are valuable and that he is a better magician than her by other standards. Tatsuya being overpowered helps drive this point home. The message isn't "less-talented students can still excel if they try hard", because Tatsuya isn't less talented or hard-working etc. than his sister; the message is (phrased more politely), "this sort of school system is bonk because it stigmatizes talented students". 

Tatsuya may be overpowered, but he gains nothing from shoving his power in everyone's faces. That will not make his sister happy (though I imagine she would take a certain perverse glee in watching her brother's detractors eat crow). Showing off his superlative combat ability would only reinforce the notion of magicians-as-weapons, which he dislikes. The path towards his goal goes through different means. 

Wow, this is getting long. I could discuss the next three arcs, but I will stick to just the Nine Schools Competition arc. 

The Nine Schools Competition is exactly what it says on the tin, a competition between the nine magic schools. Tatsuya is not a competitor in this arc (save one specific exception). He is support staff. He uses technical engineering skills to assist the actual competitors from his school. This is another way that a character can be overpowered but still serve the narrative. Tatsuya's skill as a magic engineer is such that he can fine-tune a competitor's gear to bring out their full potential. The author likes their hard magic system, so this is a big deal for the story, but it is still up to the competitor to win or lose. 

It's like Tatsuya is a support party member in an RPG that can only cast amazing buff spells on the party. He may be why First High wins their bouts, but he is not the one winning. The classmates he supports are the ones winning. This way, Tatsuya can be amazing while sharing the spotlight, and the author can further support the theme from the first arc. 

Tatsuya can, and does, win basically every fight he enters, but he doesn't enter fights without a reason. He's not a blood knight, like Saitama, and he doesn't treat conflict as a game to enjoy, like Blank, the gamer siblings. It's all about what is gained through the action he takes (again, oversimplifying a LOT. The full details behind Tatsuya's motivations are spoilers). There is no single action he can take that will achieve his goal or solve his problems, and certainly not without creating more problems. 

This is what makes Tatsuya the right protagonist for this story. He enables the author to write about what they want to write about: dialogues, intrigue, the hard magic system, etc. If combat comes up, and it does, then Tatsuya can end it quickly and the plot can move on. 

I would write about how Tatsuya doesn't end EVERY combat scene, and the other characters aren't helpless, but this post is too long already. 

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Brian Wilkerson is an independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor's degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Sunday, June 26, 2022

Ultra Kaiju Humanization Project volume 2

 Ultra Kaiju Humanization Project volume 2

I picked up this volume at the same place as the first, my local library. It is much the same as the first. It has more short "episodes" of cute monster girls doing cute things, and also more hints at something bigger building behind the scenes. 

This volume has more of a plot structure than the first. Mephilas and her group plot to takeover the earth by "stealing its heart", which they plan to do by becoming an idol singer group in Japan (Akibara, naturally). So many of this volume's hijinks take place on Earth. 

It is still cute, still funny, and still shallow. And bad things still happen to Jamilar. They're played for laughs but they're a major buzz kill for me. 

 Trickster Eric Novels gives "Ultra Kaiju Humanization Project volume 2" a C


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Brian Wilkerson is an independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor's degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Sunday, May 29, 2022

My Hero Academia - Vigilantes - volume 1

The first volume of the spin-off is off to a great start!

The core cast is entirely separate from the main series, yet the author and artist have no trouble establishing them quickly. Koichi is immediately established as the Nice Guy he is, a fact cemented by his first hero/vigilante name actually being "Nice Guy", because his initial heroics are things like picking up trash and giving directions to people who are lost. He also benefits from comparisons to main series protagonist, Midoriya, as someone who wants to be a hero but isn't born with a combat quirk. He has a great character arc in this volume alone. 

Knuckleduster is, likewise, a meaty character from the get-go. The afterword in this volume describes him as the MHA version of Batman, similar to how All Might is MHA's Superman. I say that is an accurate comparison. He operates in the shadows, punches out thugs with mundane strength, and recruits a talented boy to be his Robin counterpart. He is also used for comedy, which surprised me. He and Koichi have a Straight Man and Wiseguy routine, with Koichi as the straight man reacting to his over-the-top antics. 

Finally, Pop-Step, the third member of the trio, is developed from the same time as Koichi. In fact, the two of them are contrasted in the very first scene. Koichi's quirk requires him to assume a crawling position, and this makes him look creepy. Pop-Step's quirk enables her to jump high, and so people literally and figuratively look-up-to this independent idol. Yes, she is an idol singer. She performs song and dance routines on city streets, which is illegal, and not only because she uses her quirk without a license. At the same time, she is a selfish attention seeker and also a budding hero. She does, after all, go on vigilante patrols with Koichi and Knuckleduster on top of her schoolwork and independent idol biz. 

The plot itself is quickly set-up and established as meaningful. These vigilantes do hero work even if they are not professional heroes. Side - note; Present Mic has a scene where he states that vigilantes like Knuckleduster were heroes before "hero" was a profession, back in the early days of the super-hero society. 

Someone is passing out a Psycho Serum. It is a drug that amplifies the power of a quirk while at the same time diminishing the user's ability to reason. In short, it creates "instant villains" out of ordinary people. Making it more insidious, some users aren't aware that it is a drug at all, and it doesn't have to be taken voluntarily. It is called "Trigger". 

Knuckleduster recruits Koichi to help him track down users and find the source. 

Strangely, all the users of this Trigger become monstrous after using it. They literally transform into monstrous entities that would surely be seen as villains by civilians. I wonder if this is intentional, in-universe, that is. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "My Hero Academia - Vigilantes - volume 1" an A+


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Brian Wilkerson is an independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor's degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Sunday, May 22, 2022

Ultra Kaiju - Humanization Project - volume 1

A Cute Girls doing Cute Things series, where the cute girls used to be large monsters. Yes, that's what it is. This is a story where giant monsters are reincarnated as cute human girls and gather in a high school just for them, where they have harmless fun with each other. If you find this a silly situation, then you are not alone. The protagonist, Meflias, agrees with you. 

After his canon fight with Ultraman, Meflias wakes up to discover that they have become a human girl. The mysterious principal of the high school she is expected to attend offers little in the way of explanation. The school doesn't even have any actual classes. Meflias is expected to live a life that consists of self-study, school club activities, and hanging out with other kaiju reincarnated as human girls. No conquering of earth or fighting Ultramen. 

As you can expect, this is a silly and cutesy series. Its chapters are stand-alone comedy skits. Those are funny, definitely, but also kind of shallow. There isn't much of a plot going on, except there are hints that something is going on behind the scenes. I get the sense that someone is trying to tame/domestic/redeem/ etc. the various kaiju that the various Ultramen defeat. There is also a scene that implies Meflias-chan the human girl might have more to her than "defeated by Ultraman as in canon".  These and other things make me think that "Humanization Project " might be more than a subtitle for the series, and might be something in-universe.

The art is cute, for sure. It makes the light read even lighter. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "Ultra Kaiju - Humanization Project -  volume 1" a B+


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Brian Wilkerson is an independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor's degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Sunday, March 20, 2022

The Irregular at the Magic High School - light novel volume 1

I looked into this because I watched the anime on Crunchyroll. It is a fun show, but I got the sense that I was missing a lot of content. It was in the way events were presented and exposition was delivered, they hinted at much more. So, I picked up the first volume out of curiosity.  I was right. There is a lot more going on than the anime shows. 

The anime shows the events that take place and the outward relationships between characters. It doesn't show all the world-building and magic theory that the author, Tsutomu Sato, put into the light novel. Just as an example of the former, Tsutomu Sato uses several paragraphs to describe the evolution of the train system in Japan, and the effect this has on human life and relationships. The magic system gets even more space. 

Indeed, one could say that this story is not so much about the Shiba Siblings as much as it is about this modern magic system that Tsutomu Sato has devised. Chapter 0 is entirely about magic, and various points about it and its terminology are re-iterated to enforce understanding or introduce something new. The Shiba Siblings, standing at opposite ends of this magic system, serve to illustrate various mechanical and social effects of it. 

Overall, I found this to be a somber and technical story. It doesn't have many highs or lows, simply progressing at an even pace. Even fight scenes are like this. It is kind of like Tatsuya Shiba's mood, stoic-leaning-dour. It is a very interesting story, but I can't say I enjoyed reading it. Then again, this is the Enrollment Arc, and this arc isn't as much fun in the anime as the following arcs are. I'm thinking the next volume I read will be the start of the Nine Schools Competition arc. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "The Irregular at the Magic High School -  light novel volume 1" an A


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His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Wednesday, February 23, 2022

A Certain Scientific Accelerator V2

Find new stories at your local library! I found this one at mine. I read the first volume some time ago, so I was interested in picking up this second one. 

This feels like an episode. That is my impression of it. This volume is the content of one episode. The first several chapters are about one scene, which is mostly an action set-piece. It doesn't feel as though much happens for the first half of the volume. Then the pace picks up. It is like the event in the hospital was the trigger to set something big into motion. So, in hindsight, it was a good thing to make it a big event space-wise; give it significance. 

So, this volume struggled to hold my attention in the first couple chapters, but then attained a firm grip mid-way through. 

It was certainly interesting enough to make me want to look up specific terms used here. Anti-skill, Disciplinary Action, Dark Side of Academy City, I wanted to know more about these terms because I wanted to understand the volume better. I don't recall them coming up much in A Certain Magical Index, which is what I am more familiar with. 

Last Order is cute, like always. 

Estele is a good choice of foil/partner for Accelerator. A kind necromancer working with the brutal esper makes for interesting dialogue and comparisons. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "A Certain Scientific Accelerator V2" a C+


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Brian Wilkerson is an independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor's degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Thursday, February 10, 2022

A Certain Magical Index - light novel volume 2 (read for fun)

I picked up this volume from the public library because I've watched several arcs of the anime, this one included. The Misawa Cram School arc, the one with the so-called "failed heroine" Asia Himegami. I must say that it is much different from its anime adaptation. 

You might say, well, of course, it is. The adaptation is always different. This one was particularly extreme in its difference. The anime shows what happens to the characters. They clash over their goals and personalities.  The light novel presents the thoughts of the characters as they pursue their goals. It's not just Touma's either. It is Touma's and Stiyl's and Asia's and Aureolus's (both of them). The light novel shows the inner thoughts of five different characters, and they're all depressing. What's worse, it all appears to be pointless. 

Spoilers.

Spoilers.

Spoilers ahead. 

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Touma is basically driven by guilt. It is guilt for "deceiving" Index about his memory loss and thus feeling like a fraud, and guilt for supposedly obstructing Aisa's escape from the Misawa Cram School. He even feels guilty about not being able to save a knight who was 99% dead before he arrived on the scene. Is he like Shirou from Fate Stay Night, and have this complex about saving people?

Stiyl has this hedgehog's dilemma thing over being Index's prior partner and some other dirty work I'm assuming that he's done. It's hard to get a fix on his personality. He cares a great deal about Index, but doesn't care about making her sad by using her precious current partner as a shield and distraction. The narrative says that he doesn't feel jealousy or envy, but the things he says and does are spiteful. It's not a pleasant narration. 

Asia, despite being this story's McGuffin Girl, doesn't really seem all that important. She is being used as vampire bait by Aureolus Isard, but vampires never appear, and so her esper power never comes into play. It kinda sounds like she is the subject of commodity speculation that ran ammuk. Yes, I know she has an interlude showing her power in effect, but the whole thing still feels like an over-reaction. Neither the magic side nor the science side are sure that vampires even exist. 

The two Aureolus characters are pitiful. One of them is a clone with Cloning Blues, and the other is the real deal who has a mess of other mental issues. Both of them are essentially defeated by the heroes provoking them into a self-destructive mental spiral. This brings me to my next point. 

The volume's story feels pointless. 

I don't mean this in the sense of "filler". That word is banded about a lot, and carries a lot of different meanings, and the most general of them is "I didn't like it". No, what I mean is that this volume's story negates itself. It negates itself on multiple ocassions times. 

1. Touma and Stiyl go to rescue Asia from Misawa Cram School but by the time they arrive, Aureolus has already hijacked the place and made a deal with Asia. She wasn't trying to escape early in the novel.  She was walking around trying to attract vampires for Aureolus in exchange for him concealing her /from/ vampires in his cram school lair the rest of the time and also for working on a more permanent solution for her. This solution is a Walking Church item like what Index used to use (or still uses, whatever). So, there was no need for a rescue mission. Asia explains this when Touma finds her walking around the school freely. 

2. Aureolus did all this stuff at the cram school and with Asia to fix Index's memory problem.  Yet, that problem has already been fixed. It was the subject of the previous novel. And Stiyl knew this. He knew Aureolus and what the alchemist was trying to do. Aureolus knew him as well. I don't get the sense that they were enemies outside of this particular incident. This means that We Could Have Avoided This Plot kicks in. He even explains this when he states that Aureolous will never succeed, because Touma already has. 

 I can only assume that Stiyl's apathy is the reason he didn't pick up a phone and call Aurelous. Surely researching the phone number of a school's principal wouldn't be too hard for the English Puritan Church. 

3. Aureolus's power itself negates a good stretch of the book. Styil and Touma fight Aureolus's clone in four rounds of combat. Lots of injury. Lots of property damage. Lots of death. All of that happens before the clone finally dies.  Then the real Aureolus resets everything. He reverses everything that happened as a result of the clone battles. Aureolus never mentions his clone,  (not that I recall anyway) so I wonder what the purpose of it was in the narrative. 

Also, Aureolus's power literally negates itself. Touma and Styil defeat him by making him doubt himself and fear Touma. Using the flaw of self-defeatism to do away with a reality warper is cheap. It is not a satisfying storyline. 

Despite all of that, I can't really say that this is a bad story. 

It is internally consistent.  All of its rules about science and magic appear to be followed. 

The motivations of the characters make sense, and the actions they take based on those actions make sense. Their emotions are clear and well developed. 

Aureolus and Stiyl are set up as foils of Touma. They are Index's previous partners who failed to save her. The way they handle this fact says much about their character and guides their actions. 

Asia is set up as a foil for Index herself, a girl with a valuable supernatural aspect that the science and magic sides seek to control for their own reasons. The key difference here is that she is not Locked Out of the Loop like Index was, and so she can take more informed choices about her situation. 

Even Styil's inaction on informing Aureolus about Index's improved condition can make sense. By taking over a school in Academy City, Aureolus upset the balance of power between the magic side and the science side. He was basically a wanted fugitive. There is an early scene dedicated to this bit of political entanglement. Talking things out with him was evidently never an option. 

I get the sense that all the pointless was the point. A theme of "how do you respond in the face of impossible desires" is what I'm getting from this book. So, while I can't say it is a "bad" story, I can say it is a "flawed" story. I can also say that it is not a "fun" story, at least not for me. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "A Certain Magical Index - light novel volume 2" a C



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His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Sunday, December 19, 2021

The Isolator - Realization of Absolute Solitude. manga volume 1 (read for fun)

This is a book that I found at my local library. You can find a lot of good stuff by browsing your local library. This is the manga adaptation of the first light novel. 

In this story, a Mass-Super-Empowering Event took place in the modern world a couple years prior to the start of the story proper. One of those empowered is our protagonist, Minoru Utsugi. He developed a personal force field that protects him from harm and dulls external sounds, metaphorically isolating him from the world, in accordance with his wish to be separate from the world. Minoru is aware of this power, to some extent, from the story's beginning. 

In his view, his wish was misunderstood. Instead of Barrier Warrior type abilities, it sounds like what he wants is the ability to fade out of the world entirely and live in a void. Why the desire for isolation? That is slowly revealed. It has good build up. Though, I'd say the manga adaptation fumbles the revelation a bit. 

See, we are introduced to Minoru when he is jogging as a ritual of forgetting. He's trying to suppress some terrible memory. A bit later on, it seems as though this terrible memory is a teacher speaking badly of his lunch and Minoru shouting at them. It is clear that the nerve touched actually relates to his sister, who made the lunch, and thus this memory leads to the true terrible memory, but the presentation is still kind of narmy. Even when the truth comes out, it is so abrupt and laconic, that the emotional weight isn't present. This singular event that has shaped Minoru's life and personality isn't explored. I don't know if this is true in the light novel as well, but here in the manga version, it falls flat for me. 

What DOESN'T fall flat is the plot thread involving Minowa's pursuit of Minoru. The boy seeking absolute solitude has a girl trying to get closer to him. She is introduced early on, during the jogging scene that also introduces Minoru. No, she doesn't run into him; no Crash-Into-Hello / Meet Cute here. She actually has trouble catching up to him which, incidentally, ties into the narrative development of Minoru's superpower. Her character develops alongside his, and so we learn a good bit about her. 

We get her history, her hobby (track team star), and why she is pursuing Minoru. We even learn a detail like she recently cut her hair short because of the high school track team's rule. Her Moe rating is high. So when the villain of the arc targets her, reader concern for her is also high. 

Now about that - when a love interest is threatened by a villain, it can feel artificial. You know, like it is an excuse to get the hero and villain into conflict. Not so here. The villain and love interest are developed independently, and so the reader can see why The Biter is after Minowa in particular. It makes perfect sense why their paths would cross, and thus why Minoru is pulled in as well. It is not a case of "my love interest is in danger!" No. It follows the development Minoru has so far. 

He wants to avoid bad memories, so he wants to avoid regrets. He wants to avoid the emotional pain caused by regrets and bad memories. That's why he thinks his force field is useless - it does nothing for his emotional pain. So when he has even an inclination that Minowa could be in trouble, he investigates so he doesn't regret not taking action later. This natural development, the culmination of the actions taken by all three characters up to this point, is what leads to the climax. THAT is a satisfying payoff. 

The art is great. Minow is cute. Minoru always looks like he needs a hug. The villain is menacing. All that good stuff. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "The Isolator - Realization of Absolute Solitude. manga volume 1" a B+




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Brian Wilkerson is a independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Tuesday, August 31, 2021

Ciaphas Cain - HERO OF THE IMPERIUM (read for fun)

 Commissar Ciaphas Cain is a legend. His bravery is unmatched among The Emperor's servants. His sense of fairness and compassion are without equal in the history of the Officio Prefectus commissariat. His ability to slay The Emperor's enemies is exceeded only by his capability to inspire the men and women under his command. He is THE HERO OF THE IMPERIUM!

He is also a selfish and cowardly man who sincerely believes that his reputation is both nonsense and totally undeserved. He is just trying to survive in a job he never wanted. 

This book is a lot of fun to read. 

The key thing that makes this work, in my opinion, is the format of the narration. It is a first-person narrative, but it is more than that. It is the autobiography of Ciaphas Cain, which helps with certain problems of the first person narration format. This is not Cain writing down events shortly after they happen, but much later when he is much older. So the events depicted have this reflective air to them. There is no attempt at maintaining suspense, at least with regards to Cain's mortality. Cain regularly references events that occur after what he is currently narrating, so the reader doesn't have to struggle with suspending disbelief regarding whatever danger he finds himself in. 

The autobiography is not self-conscious or awkward because the reader is reading a document that exists in-universe. So, yes, Cain is talking to you, Unknown Reader. He is telling you his story in his own cowardly and self-interested words. He is able to do novel-style things like foreshadowing because it is couched in the reflective air of someone reminiscing about things that happened long ago. A phrase similar to "If I had known what danger I was going into, I wouldn't have gone there" serves as foreshadowing, or some joke that makes sense on its own at the time but gains additional meaning later. 

What's more, there is an additional step to the frame narrative, and that is what really pulls everything together. You see,  "autobiography of Ciaphas Cain" is only one part of it. The other part is that Inquisitor Amberly Vail is the editor of the "Cain Archive", as she calls it. She pulled together Cain's autobiography from small and disorganized pieces that Cain wrote prior to his eventual death. She is the one responsible for making this in-universe autobiography coherent. This then provides a justification for the other limitations in a first person narration. 

Amberly adds notes to flesh out some of the things that Cain says. She intersects the autobiographical parts with information from other sources that provide context to the situation, and explain events that are relevant to Cain's adventure that he did not take part in, and thus knew nothing about. So Cain can write his self-focused narrative about how he is a selfish coward who doesn't care about anything but surviving, and it can stay that way. The real life author, Sandy Mitchell, doesn't have to compromise the authenticity of the narrative voice by wedging in necessary information. 

In other words, the reader is given the experience of finding the "Cain Archive",  written by Ciaphas Cain and edited by Amberly Vail, and then reading it within the Warhammer 40K universe. 

It is a fun experience. The jokes that Cain makes, mostly at his own expense, are a good source of comedy, and there is plenty of black comedy as well. Cain derives a certain pleasure from Jurgen's use of a melta during the final mission of "For the Emperor". 

The stories themselves are good too. It is not just the narrative framework that makes them fun. The short story at the start of this collection, for instance, makes great use of the narrative framework. One can read Cain's account of his first mission and understand how he sees his actions as utterly self-serving, and then consider the events themselves from an external perspective and understand how so many people started thinking of him as this brave and brilliant hero. 

If I had to make one complaint, it would be that the climax for the story "For the Emperor" feels weak. I had the feeling of soggy bread as I read it. The reasoning "the inquisitor had cool tech that I didn't know about" feels like an asspull. However, it is totally appropriate, and would fit in-universe. In fact, I imagine someone who is more familiar with the gear that Inquisitors' have access to from playing a Warhammer 40K game would pick up on the foreshadowing. To me, it felt like an asspull rather than a Chekhov's Gun. As much as I dislike that, I don't feel justified in lowering the grade as a result, given the rest of the book as a whole. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "Ciaphas Cain  - HERO OF THE IMPERIUM" an A+



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His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.




Sunday, July 11, 2021

Pendragon's Heir (book 1) (read for fun)

 
This is a book I found in the local library. I didn't look for it. It just happened to be on the same shelf as another book that I was deliberately looking for. That's one of the fun things about a local library. You can browse the shelves freely, with nothing but the Dewey Decimal System arranging the books in front of you (no algorithms!). 

Anyway, the premise of this book is a schoolgirl discovering that she has inborn powers of clairvoyance when a terrorist organization tries to kidnap her for them. This leads to a Meele a Tois between said terrorist organization (basically the Illuminati), an international crime-fighting organization known as L.A.N.C.E. , and the private army of robots commanded by superhero Arthur Keep. That sounds like a lot, doesn't it? 

It it, kind of, but the way it is presented removes any feeling of info dump or confusion. The only confusion here is the budding Seer's own confusion. See, Elaine is a first-person narrator, so the reader experiences her confusion at the sudden 180 shift in her peaceful and boring life. The information provided to her (and thus the reader) comes in a steady and easily digestible stream, though she finds it frustratingly slow, which is understandable. Personally, I found it was surprisingly easy to keep track of everything. 

There are a couple things I want to address. They are concerns I had when I started reading this book. 1.) Will Reddington, Elaine's love interest, would be a hot-seductive-dangerous stereotype, and lack anything else of a personality. 2.) Elaine's clairvoyance would never amount to much, and just serve as a macguffin to make people fight over her and keep her involved in the plot; she herself would just be an observer of the plot. 

I have read a book with a similar premise to this: a girl with psychic powers who is involved with secret agent type schemes and whom the villain wants to recruit for her powers. It was one of the worst books I have ever read. Even now, years later, I can remember it clearly, and I use it as the standard for books that deserve an "F" by my grading scale. I am not joking at all. However, with this book, Pendragon's Heir, all of my concerns were unfounded. 

Will Reddington has a full-developed character. He has an existence separate from Elaine. He never tries to seduce her, and has his own character arc unfold alongside hers. He has a purpose in the narrative beyond "being an attractive love interest".  

Also, Elaine develops her powers over the course of the story, thanks to mentoring by a much older and experienced Seer (so she's not a unique special person either). At the start of the story, Elaine's powers are latent. They manifest as images that superimpose themselves over her literal eyesight. By the climax, she learns multiple uses for them, from spying on enemies to combat clairvoyance. Furthermore, all these uses have clear rules and limitations. So the clairvoyance is never used for an I Just Know sort of situation. 

As for being an observer to the plot, defying that idea is part of Elaine's personal conflict throughout the book. All four of her parents (two blood parents and two step-parents), want to keep her away from the fighting, because she is a civilian without training or experience in combat. So she is basically grounded in her father's tower for most of the story and surrounded by his army of robotic knights. She has to endure a good deal of combat training and physical conditioning, bond with her father to develop a level of mutual trust, and execute some covert maneuvers to prevent her caring-but-overprotective father from sidelining her. The climatic chapter is even titled, "Where I refuse to be sidelined no matter what". In other words, Elaine tries very hard to avoid being reduced to an observer. 

Did you notice the phrases "father's tower" and "small army of robotic knights"? Yes, those are literal statements. Elaine's blood father is Arthur Keep, an eccentric gazillionaire inventor who is the world's biggest fan of the King Arthur Mythos. Arthur Keep lives in Keep Tower, which is styled like a medieval European fortified tower (albeit with modern construction and technology) and one of his inventions is a type of combat robot who can either become literal armor for a human or move independently. Also, they are named after the Knights of the Round Table. Arthur's fatherly petname for Elaine is "princess", because that is basically what she is, legal heir to the Keep Incorporated kingdom. 

Aside from that, Arthur Keep is definitely based on the Marvel Cinematic Universe's version of Tony Stark. He prefers working in his laboratory to doing anything business-management related, rarely takes anything seriously, is a public superhero in powered armor he invented himself and grabbles with trust issues, except when it comes to his wife, a very professional and business-savy woman to whom he delegates any and all CEO duties, to the point where she IS the CEO of Keep Incorporated. The book was published in 2019, after many MCU movies featuring Iron Man. 

The first chapter is a bit slow and boring, but this is a necessity to show the contrast of her life before and after the initiation event of the plot. It is not a "make the protagonist a lowest common denominator" sort of chapter. It is actually more focused on introducing her budding clairvoyance, which becomes immediately relevant. It also leads to my final point. 

This is a Like Reality Unless Otherwise Noted sort of fiction story. Just because it takes place in a fictional version of America does not mean that it is exactly like the real life version. At no point does Elaine state that clairvoyance itself is fake/impossible/fiction. 

No. Elaine knows that clairvoyance is a real thing. Everyone in her setting, even and including the muggles, know that clairvoyance is a real thing. Superheroes and Fair Folk are real things too. There is no Masquerade at all. It is such a refreshing set up that I have to mention it. 

When I was growing up, every single fantasy book I read that took place in the modern day included a Masquerade. Every fantastical thing had to hide from the non-fantasy humans for some reason, or no reason at all. It was some implied rule of fantasy literature that the modern era had to be exactly the same as real life, with all the fantasy elements partitioned into some hidden area. Mixing them was taboo, both in-universe and out. I think it had to do with some meta-idea of the reader "discovering" the hidden fantasy world as they read the story. 

That is not the case here. When Elaine protests about having clairvoyance, it is because she doesn't believe that she, herself, has the power of clairvoyance. It is common knowledge in her setting that clairvoyance follows bloodlines, so if neither of your parents are clairvoyant then you aren't either. It is a rational idea, and I prefer it to a protagonist who denies a plainly visible truth (i.e. Flat Earth Atheist). 

Aside from all that, it looks good on a technical level. I don't recall much in the way of spelling errors or grammar issues. I give authors more leeway on grammar when they use a first-person narration, because really, how many people think in perfect grammar? 

Trickster Eric Novels gives Pendragon's Heir an A+



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His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Tuesday, March 16, 2021

SAO Spinoff Girls' Ops volume 3 (read for fun)

This is where the Girls Ops series truly kicks off. I checked this out of my local library at the same time as volumes 1 and 2. The first pair had their flaws, especially the second one, but the third one does not. 

For one thing, it doesn't rely on Kirito's shadow. The "Kuro" avatar does not appear. Likewise, Kazuto himself does not appear. This volume is completely about the Girls' Ops main cast, so their own characters are on display in a way that hasn't happened since the second volume of the main series. 

For the second thing, it doesn't rely on fanservice, not even in a Take-That sort of way, like the second volume. The closest thing to it is more like Fan Disservice, and it is a powerful and dramatic moment. Don't worry about a repeat of volume 2; this one is pure story and feels. 

You see, this story goes into Hiyori's past in SAO, during the two years she spent living as "Lux". It was very unpleasant for her to say the least. It is here that the significance of many things in volume 1 and volume 2 become clear. Why did her friendship with Rossa mean so much to her? Why wasn't she able to trust anyone before meeting Rossa? What was that mark on her thigh that Silica glimpsed when the Lux avatar appeared for the first time in Alfheim? Why did she wear a pareo like a security blanket? The third volume delivers on the answers to these questions, and in a majorly emotional and skillful manner. 

I say with no exaggeration that it is volume 3 that redeemed the series for me. Volume 1 was okay, nothing special. Volume 2 was a borderline disgrace, saved only by Lisbeth realizing that she was being Wrong Genre Savvy about Beach Episodes. Volume 3 took all the build-up from the first two volumes and delivered a magnificent pay-off. 

What is the actual volume's content? Lady Sakuya of the Sylphs calls the main cast for a tea party so she can tell them about a new group of player-killers in Sylph Territory. Shortly afterward, the main cast discovers that the leader of the player-killers is an old friend of Hiyori's. Well, former friend by now. The encounter triggers the release of Hiyori's past as Lux. 

Hiyori really didn't want her new friends to learn about her activities during SAO, because she is deeply ashamed of them. They involve the infamous assassin guild, Laughing Coffin, and how they made her an offer that she couldn't refuse. It is a wonderful delivery of exposition, with a satisfying climax that serves as a springboard into the next volume. 

The art work here does a great job of delivering the emotional content of the story. The battles are also easier to follow here than in volume 1, likely due to the human sized enemies. 

Trickster Eric Novels gives "Girls' Ops volume 3" an A+

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Brian Wilkerson is a independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration).

His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.

Saturday, May 30, 2020

Review Request: The Heart of the Curiosity

H.L. Burke sent me a copy of her book, "The Heart of the Curiosity" so I could tell everyone what I think about it. I decided to read it because it sounded fun. Two kids exploring the catacombs of an old theater, facing puzzles and traps, to find a treasure at the end? Sounds like a classic dungeon delve. It is only kinda-sorta like that, but it is still a great story that I enjoyed reading.

I will examine plot, character and polish and then assign a grade. 

PLOT

The story begins with Leo and her little sister Muse escaping from a traveling carnival and making their way to the Curiosity, the greatest theater in the country. I mean that literally, the first paragraph is Leo is cutting open a canvas wall so she and Muse can jump off a moving cart. It is a fantastic introduction because of how it establishes the personalities of the sisters and their objectives. 
Leo is the pragmatic sort who wants a better life for her sister, and Muse is more romantic than her and wants to dance professionally. Achieving these goals would make for a fantastic story, which speaks well of Miss. Burke's ability to set up conflict and engaging characters quickly. However, the real conflict is a little different. 

It is a multi-layered thing. There's the financial troubles facing the Curiosity, the threats made against it by those outside it, and finally Leo's own more personal trouble relating back to the carnival and how it affects her today. All of these layers are skillfully wrapped together into a strong rope like that which holds up the Curiosity's curtains. There are many types of conflicts but they all meld nicely and support each other.

Personally, it was disappointing that the actual dungeon delve into the Curiosity's catacombs was so short. Far more time is spent simply finding the starting line than the delving, and when the starting line is found, the following traps and puzzles are not the focus of attention. It was definitely disappointing since this is what was highlighted in the book's blurb when I picked it up. Even so, it makes for an exciting and worthy climax. It is like being given a sub sandwich when you were expecting a hamburger; the former is still satisfying even if it is not what you were expecting.  

The ending is satisfying as well. It closes the stories conflict and resolves numerous plot threads so the falling action is complete and the reader experiences closure. It also opens up the possibility for future story down the road, thus achieving a "snap shot in the life of X" sort of thing. 


CHARACTERS
Leo is the protagonist, and she is a complicated character. On the surface, she is a grumpy girl with a major case of Big Sister Instinct, but she has a lot of layers. There's her love-hate relationship with her Knack (i.e. personal magic), for instance. She hates manipulating people's emotions but she still does so without prompting in many circumstances. She also seems to have a Madonna-Whore Complex but for guys. They're either depraved sexual predators or totally harmless and nonsexual saints, and she assumes the former until proven otherwise.
She is definitely a flawed character but also a very sympathetic one. She constantly meddles in her little sister's life and career, sometimes against her explicit wishes, but always with the best of intentions and a concealed personal reason that is totally understandable given her history. As distasteful as she finds her Knack, it is still a very useful one, and so a reader can understand why she relies on it while simultaneously hating it. 
Her weakness for pastries is a fun running gag.

Muse is also an interesting character. She is Leo's younger sister, and the focal point of Leo's life. She enters the story as a timid little thing that definitely needs Leo's looking after. Over time, she has a remarkable development into someone more vivacious. The phrase "colorful butterfly" comes to mind. She becomes as good at managing Leo, as Leo thinks she is at managing Muse. She doesn't have as much focus as Leo but she is still quite vivid as a character.
The sister-teasing is cute and funny.

Our third major character is Paxton, repairman who works in the Curiosity and is the nephew/grandson of the theater’s stagemistress and propmaster, respectively. He is also Leo's best and only friend (excluding Muse). He is a hard-working yet easy-going guy. Like Muse, he is a contrast and a foil for leading lady, Leo. She is typically stressed out about something, and he smooths things over. Yet, he certainly feels the weight of responsibility for the Curiosity, and has his own issues related to his past, just like Leo.

The villain of the story, Sturgis is a more archetypal Corrupt-Corporate-Executive. He is clever, sinister, and effective as a villain, but doesn't feel as multi-faceted as the other characters. As wealthy and renowned as he is, there does not appear to be a motive to his Evil Plan beyond base greed and petty bullying. Miss. Burke uses him as a catalyst to stir up conflict for the theater and for the other characters, and he serves this purpose excellently, but as a character himself, he falls flat, in my personal opinion. 

Finally, snail circus. It is adorable.

POLISH

It looks good. I don't recall any typos.

Trickster Eric Novels gives "The Heart of the Curiosity" an A+ 

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Brian Wilkerson is a independent novelist, freelance book reviewer, and writing advice blogger. He studied at the University of Minnesota and came away with bachelor degrees in English Literature and History (Classical Mediterranean Period concentration). His fantasy series, Journey to Chaos, is currently available on Amazon as an ebook or paperback.